This is a picture of my third concentration piece! It is titled: An Alligator Angrily Assembling An Apple Pie. I like it, but I'm not sure about the composition of the piece. Any suggestions? :)
I love your title. Honestly, it's so great that the titles are so intricate and descriptive. It seems a bit busy to me. I like that the pie and apples are around the outer rim of the picture, but it kind of bothers me that the alligator is basically in the center. It might be cool to have it's nose or something just coming into the picture from one of the sides, so you can tell it's an alligator, but it's not so overpowering. I do like your use of color.
i love love this piece so much! you make your art funny and i really love that about your pieces. it just feels light and airy, and like anybody would love it. god job!
Your concentration in general is quite humorous and I absolutely adore the alliterations. In this particular piece it seems a little crowded and I can't exactly tell where the alligator head is coming from, but the color works and for the most part it's a strong piece. Can't what I see what you have next in store
I love your title. Honestly, it's so great that the titles are so intricate and descriptive. It seems a bit busy to me. I like that the pie and apples are around the outer rim of the picture, but it kind of bothers me that the alligator is basically in the center. It might be cool to have it's nose or something just coming into the picture from one of the sides, so you can tell it's an alligator, but it's not so overpowering. I do like your use of color.
ReplyDeleteI absolutely love your concentration!! It's so creative and fun. You have done some great pieces so far and I can't wait to see what's next!
ReplyDeletei love love this piece so much! you make your art funny and i really love that about your pieces. it just feels light and airy, and like anybody would love it. god job!
ReplyDeleteYour concentration in general is quite humorous and I absolutely adore the alliterations. In this particular piece it seems a little crowded and I can't exactly tell where the alligator head is coming from, but the color works and for the most part it's a strong piece. Can't what I see what you have next in store
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